This is the second version of my story breakdown, which I have attempted to improve after speaking to Alan about it a few times. I am still using the foundation idea of the main character moving schools and eventually succeeding in making a friend, but went ahead with trying to fit it into a 'rule of three' structure for the main parts and trying to make it work in terms of recurring objects and symbols. I also decided to try and keep away from the idea that the main character is being picked on and bullied as much as I could as I don't like it that much.
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